Just flesh it out more, not a bad melody, but its not good enough of a melody to carry the song from beggining to end, not a bad track and sometimes repetitive loops work very well. This song could use some drops, build ups and variations tho.
I did not like the melody, and I think it was used way too much. The drum beat wasn't good either, it was actually worse than the melody in my opinion. Now that i'm done complaining, I'll try to help.
Next time you make a song, start with the drum beat. Make sure it's something catchy. Next, start adding background noises. After start making the melodies. You should have at least two different melodies, and they should be able to work well together, and they should work with the bassline of the song. The melodies are the most important and most noticeable parts of a song. You should spend at least an hour on the melodies. After that, start adding the little details, put the song together, and I'm sure it will be great.
Very nicely done!
Great melody! It started a little too abruptly in my opinion, but besides that I enjoyed listening to it very much! Good job! Very catchy, I like that a lot. A definite download from me!