I agree with concious automation. It goes to far to soon, almost without a warning.
I think that you need to work on the melody... the timing is off...\
also, I can hear some clipping. you need to work on the mastering a bit on this one.
also, the use of sound is fairly good, but WAY too much reverb. it becomes all jumbled with the reverb that I can't hear anything at times lol.
hope this helped.
Beat comes in abruptly. Volume levels are a bit off. Too much high frequencies. Too many inconsistent rhythm changes.