Alright
I think you were a little heavy with the bass though. Bass should always be lighter and in the background giving emphasis to the main instruments at play while providing a deep feeling backing to them.
The bass is just about the only thing here that needs to be made lighter. The synth actually sounds pretty good and has a good consistency of providing a decent beat on its own I think. I like how thunder-like the drums sound when they pop in here as well.
Overall, just lighten up on the bass.
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