good, for a start
this would be a good intro for a dubstep song. i dont make music, so i couldnt tell you how. however, there is an artist on here called TheBiocide. he's a fave of mine, and he makes really good dubstep. listen to what he's got, then see if you can do the same, but just add your flavor to it. tell TheBiocide that Modemus sent you. and you know what, heres what ill do: im going to fave you, and whenever you release a new song, send me a message with a link and ill critique it for you. im really big on dubstep, and other than TheBiocide i really haven't found any good stuff, so learn from his example and create your own groove. good luck.
ps. rated 6 cuz its only an intro.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.