I agree with what's said below. Take the 'clap' out, it's just out of place. It just doesn't fit with the dark, fluid nature of the rest of the track. Even the symbol sounds are a bit distracting. Instead use more smooth sounds.
Still like it!
ugh this is so old.
Hi, Ever_Dream. Listening to the track as I review. The clap sounds a bit out place. The melody is nice and little dark :o. Sounds a tad empty with just the synth drums and bass. Now I hear a pad. Maybe that's been there, lawl. The reverse hit sounded cool. There really isn't anything that shone brightly here, but overall it was good :)
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Very nice beginning, i must say. I really enjoyed the soft pads. but when you broke the kick in, I think you could have waited 8 bars to do that, instead of 4. Then have a little drum break in n stuff.
The notes you used are nice, but have been used over about 10,000 times from every trance producer in the world. Just to tell you.
When you break in the gated synth and everything and the melody, I'm thinking that it sounds nice, but im slightly annoyed that, well, its default sytrus synths. Not only that, but the default synths are perfect remakes of popular 90s synths, so they been used a lot.
Excellent song, but ill just sum up what i believe you should work on:
Make everything flow a little more. Add some more percussion, make the kick more apparent, make open hi hats, clap breaks, and make sure you aren't adding the synths or drums too fast. Make it slow and steady, and full of groove.
Look around on the net for some nice VSTs. It'll make your music sound much more original, and more powerful and all that junk.
Excellent work, just work on trying to be more original :)
Keep it up!
Very Good But it Need To be longer and with more base...Please write back
Heh ok thanks for the positive feedback, and suggestion
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