I dont wanna be too harsh. but i wasnt too big a fan. Instead of voting down, I'll tell you why. You have a base down to build off of. You got the chords, a strong bump, and got the melody down. The sidechaining of the melody sounds a little weird to me, too much sidechaining. The melody jumps when it comes in. Also the beginning is a little boring when you just have the kick going. So, the potential is there for this song, just try to make it more interesting and fix a few things. Its a start.