Originality: That is the greatest intro I've ever heard from a song. A great transition into the song, but it was kinda bland/unnew from there.
Diversity: Great in some parts, but bad in others, especially that melody you fit in at 1:45, it doesn't fit in right. I know you were probably going for some type of effect here, but it wasn't done well. Some of the build-ups to the climaxes could be shortened, like the one starting at about 2:21, it was too long, as in that it didn't rise in power and complexion fast enough. To be honest, I got bored of the climax because it made me think that it wasn't going to ever finish.
Effort: The beginning alone shows great effort and work, the rest could have been done better.
Conclusion: Great job, overall, I really enjoyed it : )
*JUDGE REVIEW - MAESTROSORROW*
Originality : 16 +1
Diversity : 18
Clarity : 20
Effort : 17
Melody : 17
Overall : 88
Don't think i've ever heard an intro like that ^^, I was quite captivated by it! It set the mood right away, and I was able to fully enjoy its atmosphere because in a sense, you already told me what kind of story you wanted to tell with the song. Thats why I gave you that +1, however the rest of the song wasn't that new or original.
The song like all of your songs, has got tons upon tons of sounds and effects. I especially enjoyed the intro and ending, quite appropriate. I wonder where you got those sound files.
There was absolutely no distortion in this song, no muddlement, nothing, so top marks for that.
Good amount of effort, but I know you can do better Solus, if you put your mind to it, you can create Trance venom, seeping through the veins of all the poor people who listen, and become addicted.
The melody didn't really catch me right away, the beginning as I stated, was perfect, it got me right into the mood, but I did not find it as captivating as most of your songs i've heard.
Overall impression on me:
Like I said, great ending, great beginning, loved them both.
You've created the song with intense professionalism. It's well structured, it tells a great story, and it does have a solid foundation.
The shakers were rather interesting, I enjoyed listening to them. The percussional beats were simple, but rather effective, kept the piece moving with good pace.
This was a strange and enticing piece to listen to Solus.
Great stuff Solus, thank you for joining the contest and giving us this piece!
First your crazy...
Second i dont think there is a point entering the second faction but nevertheless :)
Ultra proffesional sounding track.
Loved every thing about it.
The intro was very nice and just right in length.
The voices applied were superb.
Synth lead, awsome, maybe a little commercial, but still awsome.
All in all :) SUPER WORK