I really liked your instrumentation and you made this sound really good.
I think you could have used a few more instruments in the background or something, but what you have is perfect, I just think you could add in a little bit extra to make it even better!
The intro could have gone two ways, the more ambient somber one that you did, but I heard potential for an epic, I might have to explore doing that sometime. . .
Its funny how u trail off into saying how to make it better but still say it was good. lol. its rather confusing but it makes me laugh.
original, it flows, skillful, good quality, nice!
Originality: Very creative! I especially like when the "chimes" come in at 1:16. This really puts me in a deeper state of being. +2 of 2
Cohesiveness: It flows. Nothing is cacophonous and it ends beautifully. +2 of 2
Musicianship/Skill: It seems you put a lot of thought and time and effort into this. I don't take your work for granted! This is a skillful piece with all the right things at the right time. +2 of 2
Quality of Track: With this genre, these are essentially free points. Almost no one records this stuff with a mic. The track has a good fidelity, good volume, and no excess static/noise that is noticeable. +2 of 2
Misc. & Opinion: Very well done! I like your creativity! This really does put me in the zone and will make a great addition to my personal collection! +2 of 2
Total: 10/10, the only score to warrant a vote rating of 5!
I really liked this song. It's short and simple, yet beautiful. Voted 5, and 10. Keep up the good work man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.