Yes, I did read it all.
Overall, this is a pretty good track. I don't think it's a good idea to have the drums in one ear though. Techno is probably a suiting genre for this. If it's going to be 6 minutes long, I would recommend changing it up a little more throughout the song, so that it doesn't become too repetitive to the listener. I think you've got some real potential though, keep it up!