This just strucked me in the ass when I heard this.
haha fuck yeah
Pretty good so far
I would say the main thing is that the synth and the drums feel really choppy and akward. I would suggest having more of an ending before the next drum. I'm not a drummer, so I don't know the drumming terms. Anyways, nice job so far, keep working on it, interested in hearing a final copy.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.