The beginning ground my ears hard, then when the synth came in it was so loud and dirty it tore my poor ears up. Definitely clean it up. It's not a terrible idea at all, but as executed now it should stay untitled. Work on how the instruments you used sound, it's not the most pleasant sound in the world as is. It could be good, if you utilized the right things.
I like feedback. Thanks!
Unfortunately for non-masochistic listeners out there I have no plans on touching this track. :'(
I'll make something smooth and creamy in the future.