Good work on the baseline it made a he'll of a difference dude this song is sick and still has potential to be sicker I love that one synthesis and that baseline is effing awesome
I completely agree with NinjutsuMaster. The overall quality is very nice, it just lacks a very memorable line. I liked the buildup at around 3:00 though, very nice.
Good song, but a little samey. if there were some changes, little bits that draw your attention, then it could be truly brilliant. Good Luck!