Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well this was abit differant, i do love how it starts off though, and does have a sorta {BUILD-UP} kinda rough around the edges, the {VOCALS} were ok but thought it could be abit more sharper and clear, the whole clip seems to have a scratchyness to it, you may want to add abit more quality in on that aspect of stuff, but other then that this was an ok piece and i thought it could be better but was ok with me regardless, so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clarity and quality check could be worked on

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Sounds decent

Liking how the intro was mostly guitar notes in a solo format. Then the bass came in like an Anthrax song starting up next. The drums sound good here. The guitar sounds cool with the little constant HOPO format going. The vocals sound really dark and harsh too which is cool I suppose.

The tune sounds good anyways. Sounds like a mix of Anthrax on bass and Pantera doing everything else in the song itself which is pretty sweet actually.

Overall, awesome song.

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Good, but needs work.

I like the actual guitar playing from the middle to the end, but there's a lot I think you could've done better at.

First of all, the beginning didn't really fit with what was coming up. I feel like if your gonna do heavy metal or screamo, you need some serious guitar playing, and a bit of the drums if you could. Not like you didn't have any serious good guitar, but it need to just rip as fast as the speed of light.

Another thing with the lyrics, like haggard said, was that they were too long to fit with the flow.

Though I don't personally like this type of music, I figure you did your best, and it didn't really move from what the genre of music really was.

Either way, there's some stuff to improve, and other things to keep up on.

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The guitar in the intro sounds a bit strange, just as if you used the "auto solo" option from some effect board.
But after the intro the guitar starts to sound a lot better. I also like the mixing here. No instrument that stands out too much, everything can be heard fine and even the drums sound pretty good. That's something not many manage to do.

The biggest problem I have with this song are the vocals/lyrics. Sometimes the lines of the lyrics are too long to fit into the rhythm and it ends up sounding a bit strange when you sing them, making the whole song sounding a bit strange.
The style of singing is all right, but neverthelss I think you need a little more practice with the growling.

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