interesting

one thing though, if your gonna have lyrics in a song that isn't heavy metal (cuz honestly i can barely understand what they are saying in most heavy metal) then you need to make sure they are understandable.

i can see you have the lyrics written down but if i didn't have that i wouldn't know what you were saying, you should turn up the vocals, besides that the guitar does have a nice bit of reverb to it and thats nice to hear :) i don't usually hear this much reverb onn a guitar...at least i haven't...

Not bad

Very soothing, laid back track.

Although there seems to be a ridiculous amount of contrast between the vocals and guitar. I think you could do with a little less reverb on the vocals, don't be afraid to show your voice off instead of hiding it behind effects... Not to say don't use them... Reverb can add a lot to them, but I think this is a little much.

The guitar on the other hand I think is a little crisp and dry and could do with more post processing, a little reverb, and maybe a little EQing to cut down the treble a tiny bit.

I did, however, enjoy the subtle flute (It is a flute, right?) in the background, it's subtle, but it does add an extra layer to the song and wouldn't be quite the same without it. Although, I think it could be a little more active instead of just following the chord progression throughout.

In any case, definitely a good track, keep it up.