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I was digging through my old submission and i went back to my first submission i posted on NG Don't Cry and i said. " You know what this song has a lot of potential to be 100 times better" So i decided to revamp the entire project file and i feel like I created a brand new song so i thought i should post it up.

Do a quick comparison if you want and tell me if you think it is better. Lots of great builds i feel.

Leave comments and suggestions as always. Only thing getting to me right now is the ending isn't hard enough... Any ideas?

my first top 5 weekly. thanks alot guys :)


This is great!

Hey there! This is really great! 10stars!

Do you mind if I use it in a time lapse video series I am about to start?

TIMarbury responds:

thanks and yes you can use this in your video or any of my other songs. I would love to see it when it is done.


Wish I had the ability to give this constructive criticism!

All I can say is that I really enjoy it. Particularly the unique beginning.

TIMarbury responds:

thanks. its alright, i enjoy reviews either way :)


I know this review is a little late, but here goes.

First off, everything for what it is is near perfect. I'm hearing no discrepencies in the sounds, nor am I hearing clashes in the syncs. The claps at 1:25ish sound a little out of place in terms of volume, and the transition at 1:22 is a little rough, like a pothole in the road.

The main thing about this that I don't like, is that it sounds like a pre-cursor to something that could become something of the dance genre. Unfortunately, it only goes up so far, and then goes back down. Kinda like food being dangled infront of the face.

Other than that, 10/10, 5/5.

Keep at it, man! You're doing an awesome job.

TIMarbury responds:

Thanks dude. really in dept review for me to read. I agree with you on that transition and clap was weird and idk why like i eqed it but it sounds like it was being stretched for some reason. Thanks for the awesome comments.

Very nice

This is a really good song!
The beat it absolutely perfect. It starts off slow and builds to the point where its just overflowing with awesomeness.
I was useing the badger option when i listened to this song. It was quite funny.
Overall this song is very very good it feels as though you sat down and sanded down the edges of your first submission.

TIMarbury responds:

yea thanks a lot. that is exactly what i did when going about making this track. glad you enjoyed it.


Cool music.Nice beat

TIMarbury responds:

thx . :D

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4.44 / 5.00

May 11, 2011
12:34 AM EDT
File Info
5.8 MB
4 min 12 sec

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