Ok!

Keep it up!

Just continue doing this electric songs and that!

Awsome

song you have here liked the whole feeling of the song great stuff.

Keep it up!

some nice techno vibes there

I hope you heard me there, you did well

Not hardcore, acid.

Man this is not Hardcore trust me i'm a real gabber i know hardcore when i hear it, but this osng is really good i love that acid synth the sound mixing was awesome. And the melody is to die for.

The kick how ever could been more powerful and and more distorderd.

Strong tip: Turn up the EQ a bit and play the kick in slowmotion that can give you that dirty hardcore dist you want.

Anyway this sounded way more than acid than hardcore but still... keep it up.