Very catchy.While there are parts that could use improvement, I believe that this song does have a lot of potential.
I agree that the part around the middle could use some pitch work, but maybe add a layer that has longer notes and is a deeper sound, not sure what, i just keep on hearing something in my head around that part that seems to be missing. Other than that, this is a really nice piece. im giving it the 10 for its potential- but it would still be a 8 or 9 as is, so still, me like!
Hey, thanks man. I'm actually starting to work on it again. Maybe I'll shoot you a link when I finally finish the song.