It sounded great. you've got a nice voice and played very well. nice job.
Pretty damn good
"That is not music - That is pornography with bongos!" Actually it's pretty good, and I like the bongos. Sounds like your vocal recording setup might benefit from a little tweaking - Do you use a pop filter and/or any sort of compression? The two are quite easy to accomplish and really round things out.
Pretty well played track, it definitely deserves better than the score it has received thusfar, so I've bumped you as much as I am able.
As for improvements, there is a fair amount of "wind noise" coming from the mic, I'd imagine you don't have a screen in front of your mic, so to avoid this, I'd advise singing at a slight angle to avoid breathing into it, should clear that up until you make/buy a screen for your vocal parts.
My only other complaint is that the vocals aren't quite loud enough, should boost them up to bring them to the front of the track.
And as an audio mod, I'm obliged to let you know you really should include who did the original in the case of covers. Just a tip should you choose to do any other covers.
Overall though, this was quite pleasing... laid back, well sung (Aside from being too quiet and the breathing noise), and pretty well played. Keep it up!
Thanks so much dude! I'll definitely get a screen or pop filter soon! Until then I'll make sure to sing at an angle and I'll definitely make the vocals louder. Thanks for all your suggestions!
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