The higher pitch stuff at 0:48 kinda ruined it! But not enough
Yeah, that synth needs work :/. It sounded okay in my headphones, but I know it can be iffy. Will work on it.
I do think the sounds aren't great a parts, but for most of it they sound awesome.
I'd suggest editing the volume levels so it's little bit louder (minus the loud synth, which can stay the same).
I like what you did with this. I'll be watching to see if you upload a new version in the future!
Okay, I'll look into working on the mixing a little more. I'll make sure to PM you when I update.
just had a quick listen and I won't do a big review but I was just so unexpectedly impressed by the incredibly elegant implied rhythm change at 2:38. The three seconds before that I thought it was in 6/8, turns out it was dotted 16th notes in 18/8!! Very aweseome.
...but it only raises my score from 5 to 7... the sounds are just really crude, totally dry and bland, and it sounds very much like an unfinished product. Needs a whole bunch of work in the production/mixing (and possibly composition too) department
Lucky enough I have until the 20th, will work on that. If I do a major fix, which will probably happen, I'll send you a PM so I can see if you like it any more. Thank you for taking the time to review my song, I really appreciate it.