Better drums, better bass synth, it would be amazing, musically this song is really cool, just not from a production point of view.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I know what you mean. This was really a 45-minute project I came up with between classes, and it really doesn't have a bass and the drums were just a standard backbeat I threw in there.
I'll probably revisit this song when I have more time to sit down and really look at it. It's, like you said, got a lot of potential.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.