This should have gone to goth man, when you classify it as misc, it will not get listened to, or very rarely listened to.
I will suggest my suggestions then.
The beginning grabbed my attention right away, I was quite taken by it, like wandering in a black forest, seeing nothing, but feeling the cold, dead rain hammer at your skin and senses.
The bat chirps added to the forest scene, that choir, also did really well.
There were some abrupt parts, where the choir instantly cuts off and the guitar plays a bit at random, this was not that ear pleasing, yet I think I understand what you were trying to do with that, and it may actually work in the sense you want.
After all, all sorts of unpredictable things could happen in this little world you built.
The rain that trails on after the notes stop playing, was a pretty neat effect, just let the person drown in their own confusion.
At least this was the image I got ^^.
This piece's sound quality was much higher, and much easier to listen to.
5/5 from me Misery, keep them coming.