This song has potential. Not bad at all, It just needs to be mixed a a little better, or just do it again with a higher quality =)
keep it up.
Thanks for the feedback ^_^ . I would have remixed it a little bit before putting it up, but I accidentally deleted the master when I was clearing space on my laptop a while back, and the only thing I had left was an mp3 file. I figured it'd be better to give it a chance to live instead of just throwing it out.