This has potential
Needs more sound effects, needs to be more frantic with a D&B feel and then it will be awesome. I'm thinking something in the vein of ParagonX9's style, but of course with your awesome part-playing and inventive shit and whatnot it might turn out even more awesome.
Only if i were skilled in the art of making music :/
You/someone could make a killer trance track out of this, given the time of course :p