Lots of potential! :)
I think this is has got a lot of potential!
However, there are a few things I would like seen to:
1. Between 00:41 and 01:25-ish it feels like there is much more sounds on the left speakers. Something more added to the right speaker to balance it all would be nice.
2. Between 01:46 and 02:03 the lead instrument you use doesn't really fit in, and had too much treble for my like. Try a softer and clearer piano/organ/saw instead or something completely different, but not as much treble as this one. (The melody is good though! I just don't like the instrument.)
Overall I think it's a good song, even if it isn't complete. Again, lots of potential so I think that you should keep working on this one, and maybe have a look at the things I mentioned. Still good work! :D