Uh...ok that was good...
Wheres the rest of it?
Im not saying this isnt great, but its not anything to be crazy over. Id rather hear the product of you building upon the ideas, etc. But if you aint got the time..
i know whats its like though. A million of ok-ish ideas you have to choose which to develop, but you dont want to waste what you have so fair play to you.
Keep it up.