You Need to have some kind of lead. the work is great but too repetitive. and you need a change up. over all it's good. but having done the same things myself I just am trying to be honest and say hey. I like the Key and all the sounds. You just need to put that "hook" in there to grab people by the balls and throw them on the dance floor. I like everything else. Keep trying this could be a wonderful mix. In fact maybe you and me could do something together sometime.
thanks for the honesty. i might take another look at it and resubmit. and a co op project sounds awesome.