Not as bad as the ratings!
The melody is very catchy, just work on the mastering and the loudness so we can hear all of the instruments!
P.S. I'm actually looking forward to the song if you go with it but you should have named this sample track what you were going to name the actual track so it is easy to find.
I have to agree on the loudness.
It's really because of quality issues. I did this in about... 30 minutes. Haha.
And, I don't see much problem with the mastering either. Mainly, it depends on your audio output. Like, with my laptop speakers, I can barely hear the bass drum and bass synth. Try using some nice in-ears or stereo speakers.
Anyway, thanks! I appreciate it!