Hey man pretty ill. Check out my first track I just uploaded. I'm New to Newgrounds but I think I have the skills to get up there aha http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/569358

Maybe I'm not use to this new bubble gum style rap just yet, but I'm not really getting impressed. I think the only thing that really stands out here is the instrumental. I'm not hating by any means, this is just my view that I don't think there is anything really outstanding here. Though I'm sure there are plenty of people who enjoy this, and all the power to them. I just think you need to step up your game and bring the heat because I'm just hearing a flat rap. You have a cute message, but I'm guessing you're trying to be taken more seriously. Give it some more edge, give it more soul, and you might have something. Keep working hard.

Wow

This actually surprised me. No offense at all, but I thought you had plateaued as a rapper but this is better than your other work and the message is pure gold. Your lyrics and flow on this are better from some of your other tracks as well. You are doing nothing but getting better. Stay up.