You do say fucking a lot, lol

But, I do think your flow is sounding a lot better, even if you are reading off a paper.

I agree with QSik on the vocals, they get drowned out, still.

Stairs

I'm calling this the "Stairs" flow. Cause I feel like I'm going up some stairs of climbing a ladder every time I hear you. Lol I like your lyrics, they really seemed to mean something. Three things: You say the word "fucking" a lot. You're voice randomly works when you say it, but at times it just sounds wrong when you say it, ya know? Also, I feel like you're reading this off of a piece of paper when I listen. The beat also kind of drowns out your voice on a lot of parts. Other than that, I really liked this piece. I love your flow and the lyrics. Even if you don't make it as an artist, there is absolutely no way you won't AT LEAST become a ghost-writer. Stay up.