I rather enjoyed this! thanx for the blast of euphoria...it made me feel the way i use to when i read love hina a long time ago.
Nice orchestration, but it lacks of something.
I think it is nice one. However, when I listen to the original one, it lacks of energy. I would also consider adding some drums.
I know what you mean, though this is more of a soft version something you would hear maybe during a cue when a character is speaking over scenes or at the end of an episode. just an alternate feeling not to replace the original in any fashion or form.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.