Zero bombers :/
Love it! I'll rate it five a few times to bring it back up :)
Thank you for helping me out, MisterJayElectro. You probably feel my pain too. If you need any songs to be rated up as well, you know where to find me.
I can feel that warning. The beat you made sounds like it will be played on the storm warning channels.
Things I would change is the clarity of the mix and a better intro. I think a build up would do good instead of a bassline playing for 20 seconds for the intro. Perhaps an alarm FX could fit nicely. For the mix, lower the bass just a tad. It muffles with the percussion at times.
Overall, you did a good job. Could you review back on my song? Criticism is appreciated.
Thank you for your constructive criticism. Reviews like this are very much appreciated. :D
The alarm FX was what I was trying to simulate in the beginning.
I could possibly revamp this mix later if you can PM me with where I can find the actual alarm FX.
And, with my setup, which pretty much is a small studio in and of itself, I can hear every detail of the music. Try switching to a good headset or better speakers.
I have a stereo hooked up to my PC, and have no small speakers, so I don't know how it sounds on PC speakers.