Er, it really does sound a bit cartoony...
At least between 0:10 and 1:25 it does. The intro and after 1:25 sound awesome though. I think you should probably try something different on the leads in the cartoony section, preferably less high-pitched playing around (at least that's what it sounded like).
yeah, I should get something different for that section. After sometime has passed of not listening to it, its gotten a bit "in the way" everytime i listen to it now. I still love that bit afterwards though,ha!
Thanks for listening and for the review!