idk what to say as a title,so lets get to review.
ok,you know how some peoples will quit a song if they dont find the beggining in itself good?
well here it would need a better beggining...
the beggining doesnt go with the bass.
i know that you were trying to make the song build ittself and not be too repetitive...i can see that.only,you should find a beggining that introduces a little bit more the feeling of taking a walk with a big smile (like the rest of the song)
instead of this creepy begining.the last tree notes of the beggining loop relly sucked on the song,no offence.
the name is kinda random o.O!
i hope you take concrete critiscism well,because i see something good comin' outta this.
-1 since for me its not done
-1 for creepy beggining.
if you can arrange those two things,ur in business for a 10/10 man.
I'm gonna have to agree with you about the beginning, i could've transitioned that much better.
though i should've put this in the author comment: this song is kind of a musical explanation of how i feel eating a delicious burrito. the begenning i am waiting and eager to eat it, then the first bite is when it gets all happy, and the fade out is the burrito being almost gone cuz i ate it too fast..
lol. this would probly be better in a video.
Thanks for the comment! :)
*Gives you a burrito*
Thanks you :) *gives you a burrito*