Has its merits
The saw synth should move down a register if you're going to play it with whole notes like that. Otherwise "chop" it up a bit, give it some pattern variation (compliment the hi-hats). It is also too loud the way it is not, overpowers the bass and pads.
Not much diversity in this beat. Fade out was pretty cool, try to incorporate more dynamic changes like that throughout the song, music needs dynamics.