This sounds like you just were messing around on a keyboard pressing a bunch of different notes...
this is horrible...sorry
Lol, this is very old work xD
Hmmm.... avant garde perhaps?
Originality - well, if you based this on something else then I couldn't tell - it sounded way too random though - almost like the experimental 12 tone composition method, but I'll give you the benefit of doubt on this.
Clarity - Yes, I could hear it - the clarity was actually pretty good - too bad the rest wasn't though... :(
Diversity - one single instrument - and not a very compelling composition so.. not really a great score here either
Effort - Sorry but it really sounded like something that a random midi music generator would pump out - that or quantized keymashing - this did not sound intentional.
Overall - either way I don't want to be too hard on you but this track wasn't great - I cannot vote higher than 2.
I'm sorry if it seems like I'm trying to rip you a new one here - I'm not - I'm just giving you an unbiased fair and honest review and score.
Keep trying though - don't get discouraged and seriously - if you need any help just ask me in the forums or email.
Acutally I wanted to make something special, but I didn't know how. Then it was just random. Still thanks for your review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.