Lol Hoodlum. I haven't heard that in a while. Not since the show Recess. The beginning is okay. That's because of the high hats and stuff. The drums could use more to them though. Near the end, the song feels alittle empty.
Keep it up.
Again, it's like a song that dont know how to pick a direction... It just seems random... At times, your choice of synth kills, other times, not so much. .. . ... Try a few sliding bleepy-bloop synths and leave out the Dub sounds... Make it a good mood song, ya dig? maybe you will rock it.