I thought this was either going to be a lame super sped up techno cover or some horrid attempt to rap over a famous beat. I was pleasantly surprised.
For the most part I really like your vocals and lyrics and I'm really looking to the rest, are you gonna try to do some fast rapping for the next part?
Your vocals yeah, like you said a 7$ mic, it do make a difference, you sound good enough I'd offer to buy you one if I had some spare cash, it's that legit.
I'd try to avoid triple rhyming, it gives it a bit of an odd cadence. . . still it sounds good, just a suggestion.
Anyway, I really like it man! excellent!
That's awesome feedback.
I'm glad you enjoyed it man.
I'm working on getting up the money for good boards an such.
Might aswell finish my mixtape first though.
And yea.. I'm actually gonna be spitting fast with change ups for the next part.
You have a little bit further to go, but do not give up because you are on an amazing track. The beat was outstanding, your lyrics were amazing, but it feels like it's missing something.
Which I'm sure is why you're only at 50%. Be sure to update me directly when this is done because I want to see how this will turn out.
Well mainly because I'm using a broken 7$ microphone.
I've only been writing and spitting for a few months.
As for 50% it's because theres two more minutes and then mixing.
Thanks for the feedback. =D!
Gotta admit- 1) I'm not into rap 2) I have no clue what song this is BUT you made this sound legit and awesome.