well. heres some "constructive criticism" for you. xD
0:00 - 0:27 amazing build up! a little to fast for house though. it sound more like dance to me.
0:27 - 0:54 there are a couple issues. you need a stronger bass synth, preferably one with more sub. it also sounds a little out of place cause it sounds more like dubstep style bass.
0:54 - 1:22 you need more atmosphere to this. i would suggest adding a nice pad with a side-chaining effect.
1:22 - 1:37 i just noticed something else with the bass. it would be a lot better to have it playing on the down beat so that its not playing on the same beat as the kick.
1:37 - 2:59 basically same issues as above. love the vocals lol
anyway, 5/5 8/10 not to bad for first attempt ;)
thanks for the advices :)
i will think about them and learn from them in my future productions :)
I like it.
I don't listen to a lot of house so I can't judge upon if this sounds like house or not. The kick goes with the keys/synth, and overall it is well made.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.