Not too shabby :)
The key change shows the track has promise, but you NEED to get a better bass drum and bass sound for this track to fulfill its true potential! Also the track needs a drop around 1:40 i think :)
All the crit out the way, the leads are bitching, and the melody's freaking awesome :P
Love and peace
I gotta admit, the beginning's drums aren't great because they're technically more of a melody type thing than anything with punch to it. And now that I pay attention to the part, I know what you mean about 1:40. I've got a bunch of Vengeance packs now for that sorta stuff, see what I can do in later songs! :) Thanks a bunch for the review, I love having my stuff critiqued! Even if it's a harsh review.