The song was ok.
I kind of got the idea of where you wanted to go with this, but i felt like you lacked mood, inspiaration or samples.
Am i right?
The song was nice, the idea behind it was solid, but i think that it could use some work.
Try addind some envoloping texture to it, it sounds a little dry (But that is only my opinion)
The current work was nicely put together NOTHING was out of place, everything was where it was ment to be.
Also one more suggestion from me, try adding in a smooth synth lead.
That's all i'm giving it a 5 but you should really work on it. I would love to hear it when it's finished :) (if you plan to work on it that is)
Thanx, smooth synth lead and envelope.
Alot of my new songs lately havn't been at least decent so that they could be posted, might have an easier time going back and working on improving this a little.
kinda been done b4.
no marks lost tho. its COOL@ i like but not love!