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Apr 22, 2011 | 2:09 PM EDT
File Info
7.6 MB
3 min 20 sec
3.86 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.86 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
383 Plays | 21 Downloads
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

hello newgrounds this is TMB. We haven't been uploading anything new on here because we have been very busy working on our first album. Here is a little work in progress called sunrise.
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Rated 4 / 5 stars

a few issues..

overall, not bad!

my thoughts:

change the hi-hat samples. the ones your using don't really mesh well with the rest of the song.

rearrange the build ups. their a bit to sudden. also theres to many of them. with as many as you have in this song, it begins to sound a little,..,loose maybe? that probably doesn't make much sense lol. i guess what im trying to say is that, there doesn't seem to be really in climax to the song. it just sort of drones on.

the pad at 1:18. seems a little off beat. i think this could be due to the amount of attack that it has. i would suggest turning it down a little. also, it seems to come in a little suddenly. it might sound better if you where to have it fade in rather than being so sudden.

the bass is nice. a little more sub could be added to it though.

anyway, 5/5 8/10 {3.56 / 5.00 (+ 0.60) } not bad! :)


riptide11 responds:

wow thanks for the feedback hahah your the first person who actually knows about music. yeah this is still a work in progress. yeah i agree with you on the hi hat and the pad that you hear is just a thing i put in place of the pad that you hear with the piano. You seem to know a lot about music if you use fl studio or ablelton live message me, and maybe we could collaborate on a song.