Getting pretty good!
heh, right away t'was interesting with that straange arse effect.
The beat was something else in this one, and then the notes begin to fade in, this is where it begins to get interesting!
It changes a lot, which I noticed is a common factor in a lot of your songs, this is a good sign, I like to listen to pieces that have effort built into them.
I think this would work better under Ambient.
Well to be honest, I don't think I have too many ideas for suggestions, its a stable, solid beat that really shouldn't be messed around with too much.
5/5 from me, keep them coming starfoxtechno.
Thanks again mate. another old song on my cassete tapes this was. so i cant fiddle with it anymore. im on my 35 cd now at home, with some of my best work i think ive done, ive got 6 more songs to submit. then after that, my best work. even some drum and bass coming soon. KEEP AN EYE OUT. CHEERS ALL.