Ha ha your melody made me think about Brahms's hungarian danses (the 5th one), cause it starts with the same notes and rythms.
Anyway, the melodies were not bad, and match well to each other.
Just some issues in my opinion. For a song of 1 minute, it starts too slowly, and for an example, i was expected the battery at 0:11. Cause when you make it enter i find it not appropriate, it's in the middle of a phrase, and it would have been more striking before.
Overall, the drums should be re-thought i guess. You just have one kick every two times and one "snare" each half time. It doesn't make the drums interesting. More than that, they just appear and stop. Some transitions, and some changes in it would be benefic i guess.
Maybe you should also try to make the melodic voices sound a bit different and not using the same timbre.
So globally, i guess this song should be worked on a bit but has got a good potential. 7 and 3