lemme just say...
this song would prolly go viral if it was professionally edited.
its sounds like the double in the verse is slightly off time.
To much adlibs
Your voice is strong enough without doubling up on verses... would be alot stronger if you pulled back on the doubles ion the 1st verse. 2nd verse is well kinda weak(sorry)
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