Okay, here goes...
Nice intro pattern ^_^ The voice is lovely, but its timing can be slightly off. Again, as some people have said before me, this takes me back to the 90's techno songs I grew up with.
Hello, thank-you for the review, I agree, the voice is slightly out of time in some places.
Kind of took me back to the nineties; it carries the vibe of that decade. Could use some extension, but it's not bad on its own; it's at least better than some of what gets on the radio these days.
LOL Thanks man, I appreciate it, the song was actually based on an old song from one of the very old eJay's (eJay Special Edition) and yeah, it needs to be extended.
I shall make a "Full Version" of this song.
-Madjasper1 (P.S Thanks again)
The melodies weren't catchy.
The vocals needed more effects on them. (reverb, delay)
The hats were a little too loud.
The first melody was repeated too many times.
I let you down, sorry.
I Liked this song a lot because it was so original. Haven't really heard anything like it, but as nice as adding lyrics were, I didn't care for them. They were catchy but I didn't like her voice. (That's a personal opinion mind you) Still very nice! Keep it Up! Look forward to hearing more from you.
Hey there! Glad you like it, the Lyrics weren't actually recorded, they were pre-made samples, but thanks for saying they were catchy :D
I am not sure when I will be able to upload more :( , but I'm trying hard :).
thanks for reviewing.
Pretty good, but I don't like the way the vocals sound. I think if you just brought them down a bit, added more reverb, maybe just a hint of delay, it would sound better. The voice just sounds too in-ur-face. They also sound just a bit out of tune in some places. Other than that though, pretty catchy song. :) Good work.
Hi there Robin thanks for the review and the 8.
The Vocals: adding sound fx's on eJay is a lot harder than you would expect and also I wouldn't know where to start with that... :I
Using eJay can be difficult when it come to these sort of things, just to assure you.
But I will try to add Fx's in my future work.
Thanks for the review again! :)
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