I like how the track gradually ramps up, my only nitpick is the volume of the piano at 0:33 in, I would have eased in a little bit on the volume, but I like how the piano merges and changes with the rest of the track. I really like the drum change up at 1:32 and the outro - the fade out with the guitar works really well.
I appreciate the feedback and criticism. Means a lot man. I really enjoyed your track as well. Good luck in the competition.
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