Needs a bass. Its nice if a song has a high, medium, and low pitched variations. Mostly I hear in your music just high and medium. Have to find a good balance with trebel and bass. I also feel like at 1:50 the music you have is too busy, i feel like my head is here and there, I think it would be nice to hear that tune simplified, like how it is at the beginning.
I know what you mean, I personally don't like this song as much as the others too :D, also about the busy part, i think i'll have some instruments play at a lower volume there, again i agree.
Thanks for the review ;)
so anyway, here is some,.,"accurate criticism", for you!
the first thing is, try to avoid using the sytrus presets. instead, try to make your own(that might be kinda hard since you use the demo).
your song needs more atmosphere. there's parts in your song that sound really empty, which tends makes it sound really boring. maybe add in a nice pad to fill in the gaps.
your bass. you don't have one! that definitely needs to be added.
also, this really needs to be mastered.
5/5 7/10 needs a little work. ;)
Thanks for checking out my songs :D.
Ok about the bass, yes you are right (nothing more to say really)
Empty parts--> I'll try to fill it up some more ;)
Mastering--> I'll start on it right away thank you.