Not that bad, and welcome to the audio portal! I see you have only started, so maybe I could help you.. This song isn't bad, but the EQ seems a bit too high..
the only thing i touched in EQ is bass because i loose strong kick while i was mastering and chaining to styrus. Btw check out some of my newer song, they should be better. This was my first try of progressive but i'm pretty good in other styles, and thank you for the welcome ^^