You might think im a teat but i think this would better fit an intergalaxtic golfing game. (not a bad thing)
In my opinion, I do think it fits. I can image playing a little shoot 'em up game like that to this. Except at :54 to the end, unless you're thinking about continuing that into something that kinda fits it more as a loop, don't think part that will do.
Everything else is fine, though. 4/5 9/10