Not bad at all

Although the majr flaw in here is the percussion. With some better percussion for your beat this would of boosted my score up to 9. And the second problem was the melody. At certain points in the track I felt kinda lost and confused about what was actually going on.

The synth seemed almost harsh and grainy which let the track down in a way too, since most progressive house has nice smooth and bassy synths.

So yeah:

-Better Percussion
-Work on your melodies
-Find or create some more leads! :D

Hope my words have helped you in some way?
But considering this was only an attempt, 8/10 isn't bad at all, is it?
And face it, you have plenty of time to improve! :D

So if your wanting to improve in the house genre, remember these 3 simple things (:

Thanks for reading!

Your friend,
Dan Roth.

Decent

At the start, i get the feeling of Deadmau5, but as it progresses, it has a more original sound, i especially like at around 1min, it seems very fluid overall. great work.